do you like my yr8 poem comp entry? feedback plz?

Happiness

Happiness is like winning a race,
Happiness is like entering a competition and coming first place,
Happiness is like a bird learning to fly
Happiness is like eating your Mum’s Homemade Pie.

Happiness is like eating a treat,
Happiness is a feeling you can’t beat.
Happiness is like passing a test
Happiness is being your best.

Happiness is like flying a kite,
Happiness is learning how to write,
Happiness is so many things,
Happiness is something that life brings.

Happiness is like a smile on your face,
Happiness is learning how to tie a shoe lace.
Happiness is like being with a friend.
Happiness will last till the very end.

copyright of amy

I liked it even though it was quite cliché

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