Rate my fiend deck plz. constructive criticism on deck appreciated?

Tips would also be appreciated on how it could be fixed up. thank you for taking this question seriously and not leaving negative comments or giving a score with no reasoning to it

1st deck
monsters:
Dark Ruler Ha Des
winged minion
plague wolf x 2
giant orc
raviel, lord of phantasma
dark lucius lv8
dark lucius lv6
brron, mad king of the dark world
big eye
wall of illusion
archfiend of gilfer
d.d crow
opticlops
sangan x 2
la jinn the mystical genie of the lamp
newdoria
beige, vanguard of dark world
ryu-kishin powered
stealth bird
hell burner

spels:
double summon
snatch steal
swords of revealing light
lightning vortex
card destruction
heavy storm
monster reborn
bait doll

traps:
seven tools of the bandit
trap hole
shattered axe
magic cylinder
sakuretsu armor
deck destruction of darkness
spell shield type-8
deck devastation virus
scrap-iron scarecrow
negate attack
dust tornado
cursed seal of the forbidden spell

Your first answer is absolutely right. Where is your Dark Necrofear?

Also you can only have one Sangan in a deck. Check out the forbidden / restricted list.

Snatch Steal is banned as well.

http://www.yugioh-card.com/en/limited/

Try this deck out;

Monsters – 21
(1) Sangan
(1) Night Assailant
(1) Gorz the Emissary of Darkness
(2) Newdoria
(2) Giant Orc
(2) Dark Resonator
(2) Caius the Shadow Monarch
(2) Phantom of Chaos
(2) Dark Necrofear
(3) Giant Germ
(3) Sky Scourge Norleras

Spells – 14
(2) Allure of Darkness
(2) D.D.R. – Different Dimension Reincarnation
(2) Mystic Plasma Zone
(2) Foolish Burial
(1) Card Destruction
(1) Brain Control
(1) Heavy Storm
(1) Mystical Space Typhoon
(1) Monster Reborn
(1) Terraforming

Traps – 7
(1) Magic Cylinder
(1) Return from the Different Dimension
(2) Threatening Roar
(3) Bottomless Trap Hole

Total; 42

The main point of the deck is to remove and then Return from the Different Dimension. As well as use Phantom of Chaos along with Sky Scourge Norleras.

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Phantom_of_Chaos

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Sky_Scourge_Norleras

It is an easy build. Cards aren’t that hard to get. Good luck.

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